Songwriting - Recipe for a simple blues song

Song writing Lesson.
Recipe for an easy blues song.


3 lines per verse.  First and second lines are the same words.

The third line ends in a word that is a rhyme or near rhyme for the last word in the first lines.

The third line resolves or answers or somehow completes what was said in the previous 2 lines.

The first line is often about 12 syllables give or take a few syllables. The third line is about the same.

Classic example from John Lee Hooker

The chord structure shown can be used for many songs/
Here, I is a G, IV is a C and V is a D.

I read your (I) add this morning,
you said you want a real good man.

I read your (IV) add this morning,
you said you want a real good (I) man.

Now I’m (V)here for you honey and (IV) I wanna
know your (I) plan. (V)

Near rhyme – different song – same pattern:
If the river was whiskey and I was a diving duck. (x2)
I would swim to the bottom, drink my way back up.

Duck and up are NEAR RHYMES.


2 to 4 verses is a nice length
Songs often end by repeating a verse at the end.

Practice verses- you write the 3rd line:

I got a 3 string, a 4 string,
a deuce and a diddley bow. (x2)
__________________________________________

3rd line has to end in a rhyme or near rhyme for bow.
So: The grass is gittin long, I gotta go out and mow.
Better: I got 4 cbgs and I want to build some more.

I got tuners from Gitty
and a tail piece made of brass. (x2)

______________________________________________

I want to loop like bemuzic and pick like keni lee (x2)

__________________________________________

I want a Brickdust haircut and a hat like Uncle John (x2)

_________________________________________________________

Hope you get the idea, hope you have some fun.

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Comment by Ron "Oily" Sprague on January 7, 2012 at 2:13am

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Comment by Ron "Oily" Sprague on January 7, 2012 at 2:13am

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Comment by Ron "Oily" Sprague on January 7, 2012 at 2:12am

Shake de brickdus' from mah haircut, slope mah hat lak Unca John

Clean de brickdus' from mah haircut, shape mah hat lak Unca John

So's when Ah leaves mah woman, she won't even know Ah'm gone

 

>:-E

Comment by Ron "Oily" Sprague on January 7, 2012 at 2:09am

Wanna loop de loop like B'linda, pick mah git lak Keni Lee

Wanna loop de loop like B'linda, pick mah git lak Keni Lee

When Ah comes back roun' mah nex' life, wanna be a bettah Me

 

>:-E  

Comment by Ron "Oily" Sprague on January 7, 2012 at 2:05am

Wanna

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